May 16 2013

Creative writing for The Chrysalids

Sophie’s parents
Mrs Wender
Mr Wender

Mrs Wender couldn’t believe how unlucky they had been. Her and her husband had prayed several times for this not to happen. This was not God’s image. This… Child which they dreaded to say was blaspheme! They thought to themselves about what it says in the bible as they said it aloud in unison. “And God created man in His own image. And God decreed that man should have one body, one head, two arms and two legs: that each arm should be jointed in two places and end in one hand: that each hand should have four fingers and one thumb: that each finger should bear a flat finger-nail….” They have to hide her away for several years, what’s best for her? Should we abort her? She seems so inoccent she said as she brushed her cheek with the back of her hand. Mr wender had just come up with an unusually imoral idea , but Mrs Wender dismissed that very quickly. Mrs Wender broke down howling quotes from the bible. Could it get any worse?
The next day she was lying blissfully in her bed whilst slowly stroking the baby’s smooth palm whilst singing ” round and round the garden like a teddy bear, one step, two step tickly under their” which she then tickled her excessively.

Apr 15 2013

Peer Assessment

Mar 19 2013

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Mar 18 2013

Script on Bear Escape!

Hal. Hello and welcome to (name of company) we have breaking news!
S2ky. A Eurasian brown bear has been spotted in the London Nautical School.
JACK POTATOE BYRNE. We suspect that it has escaped from Whipesnade Zoo in Bedfordshire.

Tom. It has been reported that, the bear has travelled just under 60km to reach the school.

Hal. This is all we have today. We will be keeping you up to date on all the events.

Feb 26 2013

Art critic’s Mum dies!

An elderly lady dies in London, Hackney in the Homerton hospital from cancer this was the mother of the Art Critic John Slyce. Who has told our news correspondent that he is devastated and wishes she was still alive. Despite his major loss he is still visiting the Tate Britain to critic on the magnificent piece of art called ‘the weeping women’ to give a lecture to at the Royal College of Art in Battersea, London.
Her funeral is going to be on the 15 of December and John Slyce wishes she can “R.I.P”

Feb 25 2013


The Mystical Man.

A man was seen earlier today down Kilburn High st at approximately ’12:34′ today where he had been seen in PC world. Where he was downloading a software on to almost all the computers in this branch. This software was discovered that a hacking group named ‘Anonymous’. Have said on a live stream to NBC News that they take responsibility for this operation.
This software transfers all information to an Unkown computer owned by an Anonymous member. This software will also destroy the computer by automatically putting a 250 character password on all computers which nobody knows. Who was that man in the shop?

Feb 4 2013

Primary source How many apps are on the App Store ?

I decided to ask apple the question how many apps are on the App Store. After a 23minute and 17 second wait they finally talked to me and answered my question very vaigly saying that in 2012 when they last did a survey there were 650,000 apps. The contact number is 0844 209 0611. I wouldn’t call unless you wish to wait 20 minutes. I’m not 100 percent that its the primary source.

Feb 3 2013

Romeo and Juliet: Assessment Results

Over-All grade: 7C

  1. Film: 6A – This film has attracted so much attention due to the sheer enterprise of it. It also demonstrates a confident understanding of the scene and the youthful spirit of the play.
  2. Timeline: 6A – detailed and perceptive.
  3. Translation of the scene into modern language: 6A – again you show a subtle appreciation for the intention of the words as well as a command of modern idiom in your translation.
  4. Presentation to class: 7C – Very confident and well-prepared presentation and very strong fluency with subject material
  5. Essay:
    • Reading Grade: 7A – Very sophisticated appreciation of the lingustic, stylistic, generic and historical context of the play
    • Writing Grade: 6A – Well structured, with lapses in style and accuracy as noted in extended comment.

You have outdone yourself with this assessment, Hal. You did more than was required and every activity you completed built upon the previous leading to a conclusion of a developed understanding of all of the literary dimensions of the play. You deserve to be very proud of yourself.

Jan 21 2013

Film link

Jan 21 2013


Can you see my film now ?