Hal's English Journal

Over-All grade: 7C

1. Film: 6A – This film has attracted so much attention due to the sheer enterprise of it. It also demonstrates a confident understanding of the scene and the youthful spirit of the play.
2. Timeline: 6A – detailed and perceptive.
3. Translation of the scene into modern language: 6A – again you show a subtle appreciation for the intention of the words as well as a command of modern idiom in your translation.
4. Presentation to class: 7C – Very confident and well-prepared presentation and very strong fluency with subject material
5. Essay:
   • Reading Grade: 7A – Very sophisticated appreciation of the lingustic, stylistic, generic and historical context of the play
   • Writing Grade: 6A – Well structured, with lapses in style and accuracy as noted in extended comment.

You have outdone yourself with this assessment, Hal. You did more than was required and every activity you completed built upon the previous leading to a conclusion of a developed understanding of all of the literary dimensions of the play. You deserve to be very proud of yourself.