tuesday morning
Paris goes and meets friar Lawrence to tell him about the wedding until juliet bursts in and has a sarcastic chat with Paris when he is saying “when you get home tell your parents you love me” and Juliet replies ” i will tell them i love him (where she is referring to Romeo not Paris). he then leaves Juliet tells the friar that she will demand to see Romeo and if he doesn’t respond or have a serious helpful conversation i will kill myself which we all know she does kill herself, just not know.
December 3, 2012 at 4:57 pm
Hal, this is an excellent record of both the surface and the substance of this part of the play (Act IV, Scene i). I particularly appreciate how you’ve explored the tone of the conversation between Juliet and Paris, as well as explaining the references to fate that you discovered.
The only part of your writing that is of concern is the matter of mechanical accuracy. There are a few instances where you’ve missed proper sentence markers of full stops and capital letters. Do you want some help with this?
Mr Waugh
December 3, 2012 at 8:00 pm
that would be great, thank you for the thoughtful comments.
December 3, 2012 at 8:03 pm
Great! I’ll speak to you in class about it.
December 3, 2012 at 9:04 pm
thanks sir, english definitely is not one of my strong points however i would like to make it one.
December 3, 2012 at 9:07 pm
The important part of English – the deeper understanding and the skill of inference – is a strength of yours. We can very easily work on the accuracy side of things. It will be a worthwhile project.