Hal's English Journal

An elderly lady dies in London, Hackney in the Homerton hospital from cancer this was the mother of the Art Critic John Slyce. Who has told our news correspondent that he is devastated and wishes she was still alive. Despite his major loss he is still visiting the Tate Britain to critic on the magnificent piece of art called ‘the weeping women’ to give a lecture to at the Royal College of Art in Battersea, London.
Her funeral is going to be on the 15 of December and John Slyce wishes she can “R.I.P”

The Mystical Man.

A man was seen earlier today down Kilburn High st at approximately ’12:34′ today where he had been seen in PC world. Where he was downloading a software on to almost all the computers in this branch. This software was discovered that a hacking group named ‘Anonymous’. Have said on a live stream to NBC News that they take responsibility for this operation.
This software transfers all information to an Unkown computer owned by an Anonymous member. This software will also destroy the computer by automatically putting a 250 character password on all computers which nobody knows. Who was that man in the shop?

I decided to ask apple the question how many apps are on the App Store. After a 23minute and 17 second wait they finally talked to me and answered my question very vaigly saying that in 2012 when they last did a survey there were 650,000 apps. The contact number is 0844 209 0611. I wouldn’t call unless you wish to wait 20 minutes. I’m not 100 percent that its the primary source.

Over-All grade: 7C

1. Film: 6A – This film has attracted so much attention due to the sheer enterprise of it. It also demonstrates a confident understanding of the scene and the youthful spirit of the play.
2. Timeline: 6A – detailed and perceptive.
3. Translation of the scene into modern language: 6A – again you show a subtle appreciation for the intention of the words as well as a command of modern idiom in your translation.
4. Presentation to class: 7C – Very confident and well-prepared presentation and very strong fluency with subject material
5. Essay:
   • Reading Grade: 7A – Very sophisticated appreciation of the lingustic, stylistic, generic and historical context of the play
   • Writing Grade: 6A – Well structured, with lapses in style and accuracy as noted in extended comment.

You have outdone yourself with this assessment, Hal. You did more than was required and every activity you completed built upon the previous leading to a conclusion of a developed understanding of all of the literary dimensions of the play. You deserve to be very proud of yourself.